tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15425802.post2747812871356068154..comments2023-10-26T06:59:22.098-04:00Comments on Practicing Writing: Friday Find: A Masterful Opening ParagraphErika D.http://www.blogger.com/profile/18401341362484574738noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15425802.post-63325083058717323182008-01-02T18:13:00.000-05:002008-01-02T18:13:00.000-05:00Thanks for sharing that, Lisa. I'll look for that ...Thanks for sharing that, Lisa. I'll look for that book.Erika D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/18401341362484574738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15425802.post-73036834084791325032008-01-02T13:30:00.000-05:002008-01-02T13:30:00.000-05:00I struggled a lot more with sensory details and sc...I struggled a lot more with sensory details and scene setting, until I began researching sensory integration disorder to help one of my sons. <BR/><BR/>Once I began reading about (and observing) all the little things in the environment that bother some people, but which most of us overlook (tags on clothing, combs with the teeth too far apart, creases in a cloth placemat), I began to notice many Lisa Romeohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01522310766694189857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15425802.post-72325752069647693532007-12-29T10:22:00.000-05:002007-12-29T10:22:00.000-05:00Thank you both for the comments!Thank you both for the comments!Erika D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/18401341362484574738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15425802.post-31929942268400344722007-12-28T11:48:00.000-05:002007-12-28T11:48:00.000-05:00Trevor is one of my favorite discoveries of recent...Trevor is one of my favorite discoveries of recent years. That is indeed a lovely passage you cited.Petehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13679678856824675642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15425802.post-20225085353488480312007-12-28T10:53:00.000-05:002007-12-28T10:53:00.000-05:00Erika, I've been enjoying this blog as well as you...Erika, I've been enjoying this blog as well as your newsletter. Thanks for everything! This paragraph is beautiful - thanks for sharing.Felicityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10256467492513961346noreply@blogger.com